Amazing Cake … ( a Real Writers challenge



Amazing cake, how sweet thou art,
And made ‘specially for me
As soon as all the guests are served
I can politely leave.

With chocolate icing all around,
And green icing as well
And  cherries there – one for each year
From here I can’t really tell

I hope the pale layer is real whipped cream
And not whipped-butter shit
‘Cos when I’m served my glorious slice
I want to enjoy each bit


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